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- After my last video , the feedback basically told me to extend my video to a full minute, and then talk slow while describing the exact descriptions of what my machine would do, and why it would solve the need that most college students have. I decided to use the same background so you can see how I talked slower while focusing more on the exact idea I have and why it solves the solution that I describe with more detail.
I really enjoyed this updated version of your elevator pitch. In my opinion, you took the comments that I left you earlier in the class and were able to make your pitch exponentially better since the first time that you did it. Also, I noticed that this time you were much more casual in your approach which I feel like will benefit you when trying to reach your desired segment.
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